Aggravated is funny- would like to "feel" the punch more - the roll of the sack below the tassel is too uniform. Lose the thought balloon on Dreamy. Dreamy's tu-tu looks more like an umbrella - make sure the prop is clear. Shocked is very clear - some lines around the jack in the box indicating motion would be good. I like the attempt to move the camera around for curious and the story based decision makes sense to me - but the execution is a off. The sack feels flat and a bit floaty. Exultant is very clear.
Aggravated is funny- would like to "feel" the punch more - the roll of the sack below the tassel is too uniform. Lose the thought balloon on Dreamy. Dreamy's tu-tu looks more like an umbrella - make sure the prop is clear. Shocked is very clear - some lines around the jack in the box indicating motion would be good. I like the attempt to move the camera around for curious and the story based decision makes sense to me - but the execution is a off. The sack feels flat and a bit floaty. Exultant is very clear.
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